I like the idea, but I just don't think it works well with the rest of the car. From an artistic standpoint, the middle of the car is too wide for that nose. The lines from the sides of the car look like they are forced against their will to squish down to fit this nose.
After looking at it more, it does tend to grow on you a little. I expect to see a radiator in there or some other duct work!
Wow, those uprights look like they could hold up the world! I'm guessing those are not the final pieces...?